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托福独立写作一例多用

朗阁教育朗阁时间:2018-03-05 16:12


  众所周知,托福写作是听说读写四门中最容易拿分的,尤其是独立写作,因为其结构为典型的八股文,开头段—主体段—结尾段,结构相对固定,考生平时只要稍加练习,结构基本上没有问题。然而真正头痛的是主体论证段的素材,托福主体段常规为分论点+例子,要在有限的30分钟内写出超过300字的作文,正常的考生只有一个办法,多写有效、有说服力的例子,换言之考生应根据不同的考试话题多多积累素材,多多搜集名人事例。但是问题又来了,由于阅历、精力、备考时间的限制,考生不可能看到一个大话题就去搜集、编纂一个相对应的例子,如此就算花费巨额力气写了很多事例,考生也记不住,更别说在真实考试中运用了。

  本文中,朗阁的**将和各位考生分享一下本人的教学所得,同样的一个例子,可以根据考试话题的不同,切成一个个不同的角度,用来支持不同的观点。

  以下列举两道托福写作真题作为例子,来给大家示范如何一例多用:

  2012.02.11

  Do you agree or disagree with the follow statement? No one can learn to be a leader.

  考题:没人能天生成为一个领导,换言之,后天学习才能成为领导。同意与否?

  本人观点:人要后天学着成为领导,举例奥巴马(小时候犯错,长大从错误中学习经验,好好学习成为总统)

  2012.02.05

  Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better?

  考题:有野心的梦想VS现实的梦想,你更倾向哪个?

  本人观点:支持有野心的梦想更好,举例奥巴马(野心梦想促使他激发潜力,最终成为总统)

  通过上述分析,显而易见对于我自己拟的观点,”奥巴马”这个名人的例子都能用,只要考生根据自己要表达的观点,编写例子和分析例子的时候侧重点不同就可以了。

  第一个例子:

  2012.02.11

  Do you agree or disagree with the follow statement? No one can learn to be a leader. 举例奥巴马(小时候犯错,长大从错误中学习经验,好好学习成为总统)

  Step 1

  基本信息

  通过我们自己的阅历+百度百科,我们可以获得奥巴马的一些基本信息:

  Barack Obama, the president of the USA,

  the first Black American president,

  win the election in 2008,

  get re-elected as president in 2012

  Step 2

  根据观点把例子切出我要的角度

  本人要写奥巴马从错误中学习,然后成为领导,即美国总统

  继续百度,但是这次我们要有目的地挑选对自己观点有用的资料,如下:

  When studying in middle school in Indonesia, like every black youth falling into despair, he skipped class, loitered in the street, got involved into fight and even took drugs.

  Step 3

  整合完整例子

  According to the biography, The Dream of My Father, of the American president Obama, when studying in middle school in Indonesia, like every black youth falling into despair, he skipped class, loitered in the street, got involved into fight and even took drugs. Fortunately, Obama reflected on his past mistakes in time, and learnt to be an assiduous student in Harvard University. Finally, he grew into the chairman of America.(蓝色为分析例子,正是因为他从年少的错误中反思,学习,才导致日后努力学习,成为总统!)

  第二个例子:

  2012.02.05

  Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better? 举例奥巴马(野心梦想促使他激发潜力,最终成为总统)

  Step 1

  和上面第一个步骤一样,基本信息

  Barack Obama, the president of the USA,

  the first Black American president,

  win the election in 2008,

  get re-elected as president in 2012

  Step 2

  根据观点把例子切出我要的角度

  我要突出的是野心梦想的好处,那接下来就要花点笔墨写他的野心促使他努力,激发潜力,成为美国总统。

  When he decided to join the election, his aim seemed rather inaccessible because there was no predecessor forehead. It was the ambitious dream that helped him to maximize all his latent energy and finally drove him to the unbelievable success.

  Step 3

  整合例子

  Another good case in point is Barack Obama, the first Black American president of the US. In 2008, Obama got elected, and in the next four years, he even won a second term, which had been unprecedented history. When he decided to join the election, his aim seemed rather inaccessible because there was no predecessor forehead. It was the ambitious dream that helped him to maximize all his latent energy and finally drove him to the unbelievable success. Thus, the accessible dreams would confine your talent while the challenging dreams give you the chance to do the best of yourself.(蓝字依旧是分析,根据观点的不同,对例子分析的角度也要不同,才能在最大程度上有说服力)

  简单来说,对于托福事例,基本信息都是一致的,然后根据不同的观点,呈现例子不同的方面,进行有针对性的分析,就能切出不同角度的例子,最大程度支持我们写作的观点。


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